Lettre de motivation en anglais

[bidoum]

Bonjour,

Je suis à la recherche de quelqu'un qui serait d'accord de corriger ma lettre de motivation pour effectuer un stage dans une entreprise à la fin de mes études. Mon niveau d'anglais n'étant pas terrible, cela sera sympa que quelqu'un accepte de me corriger. Merci beaucoup de votre aide.


Re: intership


Dear Madam, dear Sir,


I graduated at the High School of **** and I am finishing my Bachelor, major in Accounting/Finance, in the Faculty of Economics and Business at the University of ****.

I have a lively interest in finance and statistic and would appreciate the opportunity to broaden my knowledge by working in those fields. Work experience in your business would enable me to gain the knowledge of professional practice which I need, complete my education, perfect my abilities and confirm my choices of specialization for my Master.
My university studies and several group works, especially a mandate for the “Caisse de compensation” of ****, helped me to develop the sense of team spirit and the rigor. The efforts carried out for three years allowed me to be a member of the dean’s honor bachelor program of the Faculty of Economics and Business at the University of **** including the best students of the Faculty.

Being an active member of the Volleyball Club *****, I had the opportunity to hold some stands of sales in the framework of the society, to realize several sports articles for the club. This whole course allowed me to acquire an experiment of the sale and the contact with the customers.

Liking contacts and showing a strong team spirit, having developed a sense of organization and leadership thanks to my captain’s role in the junior teams and the 2nd league of VBC ****, I shall be very happy to put a lot as much as my responsibilities within your company will.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss further details of the placement with you personally.
Yours faithfully,


*****

Enclosed : - CV and relative documents

[Gael]

Bonjour,

Mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas suffisant pour que je puisse vous apporter une correction pertinente.

En revanche, un ami tiens un forum anglophone de correction et aussi gratuit : http://www.free-sample-letter.com/forum ... ce-f1.html

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